#writing-feedback
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What's up everybody?
I just re did the homepage for my copywriting business and I'd love your feedback.
Don't hold back... You don't have to read everything word for word, though. Just give me a general idea of your first impressions.
Be brutal!😊
Thanks all!
Hey Charlene!! Really dig the theme of cooking up copy.
So my overall thoughts are:
• the page went on for too long (or rather, longer than my expectations)
• the header following down the page makes things feel cramped. To keep it going down the page with us, could you finagle it onto the side somehow?!
• I'd also recommend a higher res hero photo if you can!!
• love the "more about" box at the bottom of the page. great little everything-in-one-place section, but having both it and the pulled down menu is def redundant
• not 100% sold on your main CTA of "give me that copy now"....it works...but looking at the rest of your language, I'm certain you could whip up a stronger one (unless the current has worked great for CTR/conversions) !!