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Hey everyone, I've taken the leap and I'm currently making the move from freelancer to agency. I wouldn't have been able to do it without the huge amount of support and help I got from some people in this group (you know who you are!). So huge thanks to all of you.
I have rewritten the homepage of my website:
Any feedback, thoughts and comments are welcome. I did design it myself so it's a bit plain - the plan is to hire a pro in a few months to design it.
Congratulations for this new journey. I am also a freelance writer and this is inspiring.
Thank you Taher! I appreciate it 🙂
title looks a little weird - run it through here
What do you mean? Each word should be capitalised?
It depends on whose style you wish to you - there's a few options on that tool. Ultimately, it's your choice but these are all common styles.
i would recommend changing your H1 title to “Content marketing for Fintech”
currently you’re describing who you are. but the first thing a visitor wants to know is what you can offer them.
just my $.02
Good point. Thanks for the tip @Michael Thomas!
Congrats on this + hope it’s the start of something amazing! 🎉
Thank you Nicola! 🎉
Belated congrats @Araminta Robertson!