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Great pitch Brittany! Love the context and story you shared painting the picture.

I think the product/offering is clear but would love to have seen:

• What does that engagement with the "experts" really look like? You mentioned for a couple hours per month you can see XYZ, but not sure what that entails. Is it general mentorship, are there actionable takeaways that these people will be doing for you? Or is it just conversational guidance?
• What resonated was the story at the beginning as that's something that I believe every entrepreneur faces at one point or the other.
• It does make want to learn more - only because I think it could have more clarity in the offering itself. "Yes I do want/need to learn from others but I don't have time as I'm already backlogged on projects. How can they give me direct, actionable takeaways or are they going to actually get in the weeds and help me?"

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Hi all, Brian mentioned this would be the group to get pitch deck feedback for our upcoming competition. Sharing below. Would be great if some from the group would be interested in doing a live feedback session!

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1UiV6pHxUjNII6hWQN_z78L6cU34qQwn-/view?usp=sharing

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Much gratitude for any input on Impakt.com's deck 🙏❤️

AI Agents of Fitness that can see, talk and interact with workouts for the Duolingo of Fitness.

https://docs.google.com/presentation/d/1BOehmh0nAvEu3Ttd6qbYRpi6A7JptUpD/edit#slide=id.p1

Hey Adam:

STRENGTHS 📈

1. Market Opportunity & Timing
2. Strong market growth projection (1.93T to 4.45T by 2030)
3. Clear growth drivers identified (regulations, automation demand, labor shortages)

4. Well-timed entry with value-based care shift

5. Value Proposition

6. Clear four-pillar structure (Enhance Care, Drive Growth, Reduce Costs, Improve Outcomes)

7. Strong revenue potential breakdown per 1,000 patients

8. Impressive traction with 700K+ scanned lives

9. Business Model

10. Smart freemium approach for market penetration

11. Multiple revenue streams (CCM, RPM, Clinical Trials)

12. Clear financial projections with staged growth

13. Team Composition

14. Strong mix of technical (Adam), medical (Dr. Lieberman), and business (Matt) expertise

15. Relevant background in cyber intelligence and healthcare

AREAS FOR IMPROVEMENT 🎯

1. Financial Details
2. Missing specific current revenue numbers
3. Need more detailed unit economics

4. CAC and LTV metrics should be included

5. Competition

6. While competitors are listed, need deeper differentiation metrics

7. Missing market share data

8. Could strengthen competitive moat explanation

9. Go-to-Market Strategy

10. Sales cycle length not addressed

11. Customer acquisition strategy needs more detail

12. Partnership scaling plan could be clearer

13. Risk Mitigation

14. Regulatory compliance strategy not detailed

15. Data security measures not highlighted

16. Scaling challenges not addressed

RECOMMENDATIONS 🚀

1. Financial Enhancement ```

2. Add detailed financial metrics:
   • Current MRR/ARR
   • Customer acquisition costs
   • Gross margins
   • Burn rate specifics
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3. Market Strategy
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4. Include:
   • Detailed customer segmentation
   • Geographic expansion plan
   • Sales team structure
   • Partnership scaling strategy
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5. Technical Validation
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6. Add:
   • Technical architecture overview
   • Data security certifications
   • Integration capabilities
   • Implementation timeline
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7. Risk Management
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8. Address:
   • Regulatory compliance strategy
   • Data privacy measures
   • Scaling challenges
   • Customer churn mitigation
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INVESTMENT NARRATIVE 💡
The deck tells a compelling story about transforming healthcare through AI, but could be strengthened by:
1. More concrete success metrics from existing implementations
2. Clearer path to scale
3. Detailed use of funds breakdown
4. Customer testimonials or case studies

Hi Adam,

I started reviewing the deck but had some questions that impact the feedback. Sending you a DM

is it possible to get a pitchdeck pdf for the company above?

https://www.aetherflux.com/

Awesome to have some blueprints

Hello @channel, This is a very informative teardown of pitch decks from TechCrunch. It is also available in the Gildre Blueprints and Tools section of our platform.