#07_pitchdeckreviews

<@U092FJ9DHA5> has joined the channel

<@U08SVQ4QJ79> has joined the channel

<@U08S68KV5PA> has joined the channel

<@U08Q8SS41G9> has joined the channel

<@U08R7J556HY> has joined the channel

@Dan Hiester has joined the channel

Much gratitude for any input on Impakt.com's deck 🙏❤️

AI Agents of Fitness that can see, talk and interact with workouts for the Duolingo of Fitness.

https://docs.google.com/presentation/d/1BOehmh0nAvEu3Ttd6qbYRpi6A7JptUpD/edit#slide=id.p1

Hey Adam:

STRENGTHS 📈

1. Market Opportunity & Timing
2. Strong market growth projection (1.93T to 4.45T by 2030)
3. Clear growth drivers identified (regulations, automation demand, labor shortages)

4. Well-timed entry with value-based care shift

5. Value Proposition

6. Clear four-pillar structure (Enhance Care, Drive Growth, Reduce Costs, Improve Outcomes)

7. Strong revenue potential breakdown per 1,000 patients

8. Impressive traction with 700K+ scanned lives

9. Business Model

10. Smart freemium approach for market penetration

11. Multiple revenue streams (CCM, RPM, Clinical Trials)

12. Clear financial projections with staged growth

13. Team Composition

14. Strong mix of technical (Adam), medical (Dr. Lieberman), and business (Matt) expertise

15. Relevant background in cyber intelligence and healthcare

AREAS FOR IMPROVEMENT 🎯

1. Financial Details
2. Missing specific current revenue numbers
3. Need more detailed unit economics

4. CAC and LTV metrics should be included

5. Competition

6. While competitors are listed, need deeper differentiation metrics

7. Missing market share data

8. Could strengthen competitive moat explanation

9. Go-to-Market Strategy

10. Sales cycle length not addressed

11. Customer acquisition strategy needs more detail

12. Partnership scaling plan could be clearer

13. Risk Mitigation

14. Regulatory compliance strategy not detailed

15. Data security measures not highlighted

16. Scaling challenges not addressed

RECOMMENDATIONS 🚀

1. Financial Enhancement ```

2. Add detailed financial metrics:
   • Current MRR/ARR
   • Customer acquisition costs
   • Gross margins
   • Burn rate specifics
   ```

3. Market Strategy
   ```

4. Include:
   • Detailed customer segmentation
   • Geographic expansion plan
   • Sales team structure
   • Partnership scaling strategy
   ```

5. Technical Validation
   ```

6. Add:
   • Technical architecture overview
   • Data security certifications
   • Integration capabilities
   • Implementation timeline
   ```

7. Risk Management
   ```

8. Address:
   • Regulatory compliance strategy
   • Data privacy measures
   • Scaling challenges
   • Customer churn mitigation
   ```

INVESTMENT NARRATIVE 💡
The deck tells a compelling story about transforming healthcare through AI, but could be strengthened by:
1. More concrete success metrics from existing implementations
2. Clearer path to scale
3. Detailed use of funds breakdown
4. Customer testimonials or case studies

Hi Adam,

I started reviewing the deck but had some questions that impact the feedback. Sending you a DM

is it possible to get a pitchdeck pdf for the company above?

https://www.aetherflux.com/

Awesome to have some blueprints

Hello @channel, This is a very informative teardown of pitch decks from TechCrunch. It is also available in the Gildre Blueprints and Tools section of our platform.

Always love

Hi Amit - here are my comments. Deck looks great nice improvement from the original draft.

• Reduce the text on slide 1 or increase the size of description under "Who We Are"
• Would love to quantify the problem. "quality records can take months or years to be created for regulatory submissions" what does this result in? Resulting in hundreds of thousands of lost dollars, cost, etc. I know you have this on slide 17 but the earlier you can hammer this pain point the more you'll hook potential investors to keep reading.
• Where is that 10% number of the $50b global compliance market coming from? Why 10% and not 20% or 5%?
• Keeping all 25 slides is important but would love to find a way to reduce to 12 key slides for initial reachout
• Instead of "12 months Runway" what is that $1,000,000 going to be utilized for? Is that development? Sales? Outreach?
• Would consider removing slide 24 with the pablo picasso quote. Nice quote, but not sure if it adds as much value to the presentation.

good luck

tks

Recommended deck flow:
1. Problem/Market Pain (with stronger metrics)
2. Solution (current slides are good)
3. Market Size (current slides are good)
4. Business Model (add more financial projections)
5. Traction (expand with specific metrics)
6. Competition (enhance with detailed analysis)
7. Team (current slides are good)
8. Funding Ask (add more detail)

AREAS FOR IMPROVEMENT:
1. Problem Statement
• The problem slides could be more impactful with specific market statistics
• Add real cost implications of current manual processes
• Include specific customer testimonials or case studies from your existing 50+ consulting clients
2. Competition
• The competitive analysis slide is too basic and lacks detail
• Need to clearly articulate unique differentiators
• Add a more detailed competitive matrix with feature comparisons
3. Financial Projections
• Missing detailed financial projections and metrics
• No clear path to achieving the 10% market share goal
• Need specific customer acquisition strategy and timeline
4. Traction
• While mentioned, the "50+ consulting clients" could be better highlighted
• Need more specific metrics about current customer success
• Include any pilot program results or early adoption metrics
5. Funding Ask
• The funding slide needs more detail about use of funds
• Include specific milestones to be achieved with the $1M
• Add more detail about the 12-month runway plan
6. Blockchain Integration
• The blockchain/token concept feels disconnected from the core value proposition
• Either develop this idea more fully or consider removing it to maintain focus

Mr. Lee is always there for me

im a strange character and suck at pitch decks....please rip me apart

if someone reaches out via pitchbook to get a sense of your company and $ you are trying to raise, what is your opinion on amount of info to provide?

Sort of a mix between simplicity and nature

It also looks cool 😝