#07_pitchdeckreviews
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Hi all, Brian mentioned this would be the group to get pitch deck feedback for our upcoming competition. Sharing below. Would be great if some from the group would be interested in doing a live feedback session!
Thanks for sharing Robie! Just for context how long do you have to pitch for this specific competition?
We have 5 minutes to pitch, with 5 minutes Q&A.
Link's not working?
Need an updated link <@U097AMD9EG5> whenever you have the chance!
@Lysle Wickersham @Brian Lee Link is updated; and comments can be added by anyone with the link.
Great thanks! Please see my feedback below <@U097AMD9EG5>:
• I like you starting off with the founder story - but instead of listing the experience I suggest tying it deeper into the problem. I'm sure you plan on doing that during the pitch itself but having the slide mirror that would be helpful. "This is our background and why we're the ones most qualified to solve this problem".
• Curious to see what slide 5 looks like with the images that get added to replace the placeholder section
• Would consider finding a way to merge slides 4 and 5
• How does this compete against apple watch and Fitbit or other wearables that have established markets? Is this targeting people who have no experience with fitness wearables or are you trying to pull people from those existing tools?
• Given your product is more heavily DTC would like to see something on marketing strategy to align with GTM. Outside of the Crowdfunding and Thallora Inc. do you have any examples of what the promos with social media influencers/ads would look like or the CAC?
Overall nice job covering the core topics in 5 minutes
<@U097AMD9EG5> can you enable comment section? So we can comment on the deck directly?
Thanks, Brian! Definitely going to incorporate these points into our pitch. @Shweta Agrawal I think the comment function is on the top bar.
@Brian Lee, Slide 5 was a specific ask from feedback thus far. We actually aren't a competitor for Fitbit, but rather view this product as complementary.
The resume on slide 1 is brought to life on slide 2 when we talk about the problem.
Examples of Influencers/Ads is a good idea. No mock ups as of yet.