#08_advice-questions

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Valentina November 11, 2024 at 08:44 PM

👋 Hey everyone! I have kind of a win to share but it's also a request for feedback so I thought I'd share it here.

The "shitty first draft" of my website is LIVE!!! 🎉 I just moved from WP/Elementor to Webflow and did a push over the weekend to get it live. I'm not a professional designer or Webflow expert by any means so I wasn't able to get the mobile done fast enough, and there's still a lot I want to improve with the feel but need to figure out how, and things are definitely missing (like my blog, cookie banner, privacy policy, SEO, entire sections)...

BUT. This was a huge milestone nonetheless! It's there. And published. ☺️

I'd love feedback from anyone who gets a chance to peruse the site! I've got a running list of improvements to make and will add any notes I gather straight to the list. Thank you in advance!

Taiga Gamell November 11, 2024 at 08:48 PM

The website structure could be simplified to make it easier for visitors to find key information quickly. Also a bit wordy.

I would Include detailed case studies or client success stories if you have them.

Is your website design/mobile responsive?

Valentina November 11, 2024 at 08:57 PM

@Taiga Gamell THANK YOU. Very helpful!

It is not ready for mobile unfortunately. That is something I'm fixing slowly throughout the next 1-2 weeks. 😅

Dan Hiester November 12, 2024 at 06:09 PM

At first glance, I think there’s room to make your logo bigger in the upper left.

Dan Hiester November 12, 2024 at 06:13 PM

Also! I think this section has the core of the idea you want to sell.

I like the aesthetic of having a top section that’s like an expanded background header color, the way you have it.

But I might move the design treatment where you have a photo on one side, and some text content on another side, and then have a CTA at the bottom of the text.

I’d make some cuts to the text, to make it super punchy and short—I may drop the green text here, because the next paragraph paints a picture of the same thing.

But! I’m zooming in on this, because I think this is where you really define your value prop, and I think this may be more impactful if you lead with this value prop—which I think is a good one!

Dan Hiester November 12, 2024 at 06:14 PM

I’ll try taking a deeper look later. But for now, congratulations on launching this, and migrating to a totally different platform! I’m really excited for your accomplishment! 🙌

Valentina November 12, 2024 at 06:54 PM

@Dan Hiester Ahhh yes! Text heavy. That's been consistent feedback.

Do you have an example of the design adjustment you're picturing? I think I can picture what you're describing what want to make sure I'm imagining it right.

Adding all feedback to my list! LOVE the details. They're super helpful. Thank you!! 🙌