#07_pitchdeckreviews

Thanks for sharing Tanho! We’ll review this and share some feedback later today.

Thanks Brian. Most appreciated. 🙏

Hi @Tanho Attah hl.d - please see our pitch deck feedback below. Nice job with your current version! As always we welcome comments and feedback from founders/investors in this channel.

• Lead off with the Problem Slide/Statement and condense the text on the page. Should be no more than 3-5 total bullet points/sentences MAX. Ideally you'll be able to speak to these bullet points during the pitch itself but this slide is too clogged.
• Consider removing the "Experience Agriculture" slide altogether or integrating it with the "Our Solution" slide. Problem --> How do we fix it?
• Market comparisons are nice (Key Data Metrics slide) but would like to see more specifics or how it translates to revenue for GISL.
◦ What are the various platforms with 1,000,000 users?
◦ What does the 26% of Agricultural Contribution to Nigeria's GDP mean for GISL and your business? Need to highlight a relative correlation or not worth including in the slide.
◦ 2nd bullet point is the most impactful highlighting competitors recent funding and revenue (what is the revenue period over the past 12 months, lifetime? etc)
• Global Trade slide would be nice to see key stats/our target based on the same year (currently showing 2018/2021)
◦ How did you get the $12M opportunity? Seems way too small based on the $4T opportunity market.
◦ Need to understand the numbers a bit better and how they relate to the opportunity size.
• Too much text in the "Competitive Analysis" slide. Consider a chart/graph comparing to competitors in a meaningful way (not based off features but rather benefits)
• Team Slide - would be nice to see previous experience. Less interested in Role Summary/Team Strength versus what each individual has done before at previous companies/roles that makes them qualified to lead this company.
• Our Goals Slide - consider a chart/graphic breakdown to reduce the text on the slide
• Recommend including your contact information on the last slide.
Overall Score:

• Problem: 2/5
• Opportunity: 2/5
• Solution: 3/5
• Design: 2/5
• Story & Flow: 3/5

Thanks Brian. All points noted and we'll make adjustments to better represent our business and opportunity. 👍👍